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Post by Emily on Mar 15, 2010 22:43:49 GMT
other villagers... DEAD DEAD DEAD DEAD DEAD... add to the angst pile.
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Post by stokerino on Mar 19, 2010 13:05:27 GMT
Ally's up for her first turn next, so yay.
I don't know whether I want to blame Yash for her choice of the captain's name, or blame Stu for starting it all off with the ship. ¬_¬ Still, he's dead now in any case.
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Post by stuart alman on Mar 19, 2010 16:33:37 GMT
Technically i already named the pirate as captain langham but if people want to just ignore that but whatever
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Post by stokerino on Mar 19, 2010 16:38:39 GMT
Hm, so you did.
I think there's just a tendency to miss/forget little bits of previous parts (particularly if they're from a couple of people, and therefore maybe a week or so, back) that we're just going to have to accept with this little endeavour.
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Post by stuart alman on Mar 19, 2010 16:40:46 GMT
also ally if you read this can you please get us as far away from what is quickly becomming a side story very similar to pirates of the caribbean (on an airship)
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Post by stokerino on Mar 19, 2010 17:11:02 GMT
Oh Stu. If you didn't want piratey stuff (*all* of which, let's be honest, is cliché by now), you shouldn't have created a pirate ship.
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Post by Emily on Mar 19, 2010 17:42:25 GMT
Go kira! Rocking out with blunt instruments!
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Post by stokerino on Mar 19, 2010 18:28:00 GMT
The pirate captain's name has been changed to what Stu originally said, since Yash doesn't care either way. >_>
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Post by Ally on Mar 19, 2010 21:52:14 GMT
Yay, blood and gore and angst! I can work with that! ;D
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Post by Ally on Mar 21, 2010 16:49:54 GMT
Okay, mine's done, but can't post it 'cos I don't have the keys ;D
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Post by stokerino on Mar 21, 2010 16:54:33 GMT
Unlocked.
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Post by Ally on Mar 21, 2010 20:31:10 GMT
Posted! ;D
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Yasha
Pirate
'I would not mind you in my head, if you were not so clearly mad.'
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Post by Yasha on Mar 21, 2010 20:38:47 GMT
Woooo, I was so hoping you'd take the story that way. But then I think we have similar tastes when it comes to plots and stuff. Tim told me when you asked to join that he had a feeling I'd like having you writing after me. Now I just have to trust Tim not to kill Kira off. lol ^_^
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Yasha
Pirate
'I would not mind you in my head, if you were not so clearly mad.'
Posts: 77
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Post by Yasha on Mar 21, 2010 20:43:08 GMT
Also I have yet to read your book. I read the first few chapter ages ago when you first posted them online but since you finished it I always forget to ask when I visit MK and Tim keeps thinking he has it but he doesn't know where on his computer he has it etc etc etc. So could you e-mail your book to me ^_^
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Post by Ally on Mar 21, 2010 21:02:10 GMT
Sure, no problem!
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Post by stokerino on Mar 21, 2010 21:25:58 GMT
The flow of the narrative seems to insist that I take this moment to rejoin the younger duo on the outside of the ship.
Hmm. At least I won't be at risk of annoying Yash by 'ruining' the other bit.
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Post by Emily on Mar 21, 2010 22:47:56 GMT
I actually think Kira is by far more interesting than the other two...
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Post by stokerino on Mar 21, 2010 23:28:54 GMT
That's because the other two are generic as, um, some very generic thing.
Kira has angst and violence, which is marginally less generic, and thus more interesting by default.
However, I feel unable to ditch them, or at least not yet, as they were made the viewpoint everything up to the last two pieces.
Personally, I think the story pieces so far have been too accommodating to the people who have to incorporate them afterwards. Time to up the WTF factor.
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Post by stokerino on Mar 21, 2010 23:39:35 GMT
And that, my friends, is what we call a 'curve ball'.
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Post by Ally on Mar 23, 2010 13:21:20 GMT
Time-travel? That way madness lies! ;D
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